This looks fantastic and would make a great desktop wallpaper as well. The only problem with this image is the lighting on her chest, to me it kind of looks like a face. Aside from that this piece looks fantastic!
This looks really nice. the only thing I can think of that would make this stand out more is if the background was moving. Such as having the logo heads moving diagonal, left to right, vice versa, etc. Would make this very nice and entertaining to look at.
The Zone logos are perfect and don't seem to be in any need of changing at all.
As for Zone herself, I kind of get the feeling the left side (of the image) of her shirt should be down a bit lower. Seems like it would fit a little more having one side down a bit farther than the other.
As for the tentacles, nice to see they have a bit of slime (or cum?) showing that she has her friend ready to play with her or whatever else Zone decides to draw up.
Overall, aside from my thoughts on her shirt. Looks fantastic!
Took a moment to realize that stuff in the water was merely a reflection. Kind of laughed a bit at how they seem to be staring at the swim suit unsure of whether to be shocked at it or happy about it. Very nice artwork as usual.
Saddest comic I have read in a long time. The fact it hits pretty close to home for most pet owners when their pet is slowly dying and when they can not do anything for it except try to make them as comfortable as possible.
The first thing I notice right away with the image are the guns and shadow.
First the shadow shouldn't even look that way. The shadow shows her legs going in two different directions rather than lining up with her legs and up to where the dress begins. The shadow for her legs just do not make much sense.
The guns, I can't tell if she has the triggers pulled all the way, the bullets fired off and she's still holding them for no reason or if you didn't add the triggers for the guns. The gun on the right... somehow it just does not look right, whether it be the handle of it, the odd thing sticking out from the top or just how it looks overall.
The explosion seems to look alright, slightly off the ground, so I am going to take a guess something large blew up in the background after being tossed into the air and almost touching the ground. With the explosion as it is, this bit goes with the shadow, it should be making the shadow lining up with her legs rather than making the shadow legs look like they are opening up.
The slight dark flare to the left of the shadow seems decent enough, however it should look just about the same for the right side rather than a dark little area. Also, with the explosion, there should be a slight wind either blowing her hair slightly to the side or to the front of her sides if she is close enough to the explosion. Should also be a slight amount of dirt/dust moving in the background.
Clarice's hair needs to look a bit messy since I doubt it would stay perfect as it is near an explosion while walking away from one. Her sunglasses, acceptable. The cigarette however, should be showing a slight amount of smoke to it given there is a bit of black at the tip of it. Her arms look alright given the lighting is coming from behind her; same goes for her legs.
The collar/choker she has looks good but what is with the long red piece hanging from it down into her breasts? Is it an aesthetic look or just a technical goof or what? The dress itself seems to be good but like her arms, it should be with good shading, looking closely it seems a brush was taken and just doodling in the shaded area. Take her heels for example, nicely shaded to go with the lighting from the explosion, should try to work on the dress that way to make it look cleaner. The reverse looking "z" on the dress doesn't look very good on her dress.
Overall, improving, just have to practice over time and improve your art style.
Nice to see a male and a female version of Fennekin drawn by you and uploaded two days in a row. Now to wait and see how the evolved forms look. Only problem from the view given, if the left side back leg has a bit of a ruffle to the tips of the spiked fur, shouldn't the other side also been drawn that way?
Great work on this piece. Although I do wonder why she has a worried expression on her face. The expression on the moon is also nice. Also, how did she happen to become a ghost?
Looks pretty good. The only thing that worries me a bit are why her thighs and stomach are a bit thick. Aside from that, pretty cool. Was she brought to life by a spell or was she born from a rare breed of cookie people?
On the top row, fourth foot looks like it has a ring on the big toe or possibly part of a sandal. Nice to see you're experimenting with different foot poses and all. Also why would Komachi's feet be tired? Was she walking around all day/night?
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Rated 4 / 5 stars 1 month ago
This looks fantastic and would make a great desktop wallpaper as well. The only problem with this image is the lighting on her chest, to me it kind of looks like a face. Aside from that this piece looks fantastic!
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars 1 month ago
This looks really nice. the only thing I can think of that would make this stand out more is if the background was moving. Such as having the logo heads moving diagonal, left to right, vice versa, etc. Would make this very nice and entertaining to look at.
The Zone logos are perfect and don't seem to be in any need of changing at all.
As for Zone herself, I kind of get the feeling the left side (of the image) of her shirt should be down a bit lower. Seems like it would fit a little more having one side down a bit farther than the other.
As for the tentacles, nice to see they have a bit of slime (or cum?) showing that she has her friend ready to play with her or whatever else Zone decides to draw up.
Overall, aside from my thoughts on her shirt. Looks fantastic!
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Another great review SCTE3!, I thank you for the review and for the advice, are very useful and I'm glad you liked this design! :D
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars Apr 5, 2013
Took a moment to realize that stuff in the water was merely a reflection. Kind of laughed a bit at how they seem to be staring at the swim suit unsure of whether to be shocked at it or happy about it. Very nice artwork as usual.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars Mar 17, 2013
Saddest comic I have read in a long time. The fact it hits pretty close to home for most pet owners when their pet is slowly dying and when they can not do anything for it except try to make them as comfortable as possible.
Beautiful, sad, and very emotional.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars Mar 10, 2013
Nice to see you stuck to the original game's interpretation of Vivian simply being a male. Nice artwork as usual.
Like I would miss out on a excuse to draw a chick with a dick.
Rated 2 / 5 stars Jan 21, 2013
Well, it is a slight improvement at least.
The first thing I notice right away with the image are the guns and shadow.
First the shadow shouldn't even look that way. The shadow shows her legs going in two different directions rather than lining up with her legs and up to where the dress begins. The shadow for her legs just do not make much sense.
The guns, I can't tell if she has the triggers pulled all the way, the bullets fired off and she's still holding them for no reason or if you didn't add the triggers for the guns. The gun on the right... somehow it just does not look right, whether it be the handle of it, the odd thing sticking out from the top or just how it looks overall.
The explosion seems to look alright, slightly off the ground, so I am going to take a guess something large blew up in the background after being tossed into the air and almost touching the ground. With the explosion as it is, this bit goes with the shadow, it should be making the shadow lining up with her legs rather than making the shadow legs look like they are opening up.
The slight dark flare to the left of the shadow seems decent enough, however it should look just about the same for the right side rather than a dark little area. Also, with the explosion, there should be a slight wind either blowing her hair slightly to the side or to the front of her sides if she is close enough to the explosion. Should also be a slight amount of dirt/dust moving in the background.
Clarice's hair needs to look a bit messy since I doubt it would stay perfect as it is near an explosion while walking away from one. Her sunglasses, acceptable. The cigarette however, should be showing a slight amount of smoke to it given there is a bit of black at the tip of it. Her arms look alright given the lighting is coming from behind her; same goes for her legs.
The collar/choker she has looks good but what is with the long red piece hanging from it down into her breasts? Is it an aesthetic look or just a technical goof or what? The dress itself seems to be good but like her arms, it should be with good shading, looking closely it seems a brush was taken and just doodling in the shaded area. Take her heels for example, nicely shaded to go with the lighting from the explosion, should try to work on the dress that way to make it look cleaner. The reverse looking "z" on the dress doesn't look very good on her dress.
Overall, improving, just have to practice over time and improve your art style.
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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars Jan 11, 2013
Nice to see a male and a female version of Fennekin drawn by you and uploaded two days in a row. Now to wait and see how the evolved forms look. Only problem from the view given, if the left side back leg has a bit of a ruffle to the tips of the spiked fur, shouldn't the other side also been drawn that way?
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars Jan 6, 2013
Great work on this piece. Although I do wonder why she has a worried expression on her face. The expression on the moon is also nice. Also, how did she happen to become a ghost?
She died somehow :c
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars Dec 26, 2012
Looks pretty good. The only thing that worries me a bit are why her thighs and stomach are a bit thick. Aside from that, pretty cool. Was she brought to life by a spell or was she born from a rare breed of cookie people?
She's full of cookie dough :>
She's supposed to be a genderswap version of another character, who was a human before but became a cookie somehow.
Rated 4 / 5 stars Dec 24, 2012
Practice makes perfect
On the top row, fourth foot looks like it has a ring on the big toe or possibly part of a sandal. Nice to see you're experimenting with different foot poses and all. Also why would Komachi's feet be tired? Was she walking around all day/night?
Overall, good practice.
Thanks :)
Maybe she's just being lazy trying to avoid work.