Score: 10

"Random and funny"

submission: Night of Mooncat

date: 12 hours ago

This actually wasn't all that bad, got some good laughs out of it.

Animation: It actually wasn't that bad really. It was also pretty random, it changed from one thing to the next constantly.

Audio: Fitting even though the half of it doesn't make any sense at all.

Storyline: I didn't really follow too well. First the cat wanted out and then a black guy kills someone over racial discrimanaton. Then the cat goes out and gets pissed since it's raining and a microwave blows up the world then we visit the land of dicks.

Overall: Not all that bad for such a low file size, nice job.

SCTE3

Score: 9

"Good dress up"

submission: Sonic Girls Dress Up

date: 12 hours ago

Somewhat makes you have more respect for Amy since instead of making her look just incredibly happy all the time you can also make her look diabolical, gangster, and other things.

Animation: Nice work there, good outfits.

Maybe add a few new outfits, was fun for a dress up anyways.

SCTE3

Score: 9

"Pretty damn funny"

submission: Alvin and the Chipmunks

date: January 1, 2010

So a mix of Alvin and SAW and yet he kills Dave anyway, why was Dave wearing a bra if I may ask?

Beautiful animation.

Witty plotline.

SCTE3

Score: 9

"Quite depressing"

submission: Shoes for Sale

date: January 1, 2010

Well that was quite sad, he asked for help and he quite a curt reply of I might as well just sell my shoes. That isn't very helpful....

Animation: Same as most of your work except they seem to have faces and the such in this one instead. Could have gave them a bit of color, they look pale as ghostly people who just finished crying their eyes out.

Audio: What song is this? It was quite funny.

Storyline: His feet fell off so he hopes the doctor can help fix it and all the doctor can think of is selling his shoes. How is that helpful at all?

Overall: Quite depressing but it has a good plot line overall, don't buy shoes.

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SCTE3

Score: 9

"Quite funny and amazing"

submission: The Mummy's Tomb

date: January 1, 2010

This actually was rather brilliant and funny actually, nice job making this as well.

Animation: The animation looks as if it took awhile since everything was constantly in motion for each frame. Enjoyed how you put detail into changing the mummy instead of constantly just recycling the same piece over and over again. Strangely I had no idea robots like that were fitting for something like this?

Audio: Sounded a tad bit like something from HORSE the band but it isn't. Is it Nintendocore? Feels rather fitting in this piece, nice.

Storyline: Game starts, the archeologist finds a gem and the mummy awakes. It somehow magically floats up to the skies where something flings a snake at it and it's bat thing eats it. Something destroys it leaving it at zero lives and it walks along getting another power up turning its hands into some kind of knives as it kills the rat, it comes to the robot and gets demolished. Game over.

Overall: Nice little piece, could have possibly been a bit longer though, nice job.

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SCTE3

Score: 9

"Looks brilliant"

submission: Snow Wars Teaser

date: January 1, 2010

Looks like it would be quite fun. Could go to a snow resort if all the snow melted before the film could be finished.

Animation: What am I talking about? This is live action, LIVE ACTION!! You know how awesome that is right? Defiantly a break from flash games and films am I right?

Audio: Makes it sound a lot more worthy than it might possibly be, will stay tuned for this.

Storyline: A war between two sets of friends in the snowy backyards of an unknown region.

Overall: Looks to be quite nice, enjoying the flying lasers.

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SCTE3

Score: 10

"Pretty funny really"

submission: Xmas at the obamas

date: January 1, 2010

Got a good chuckle from this.

Animation: Sloppy animation, poor tweens, however it looks like you spent awhile with each frame which is great I guess.

Storyline: Some person wit ha bag on their head watches Obama diss the Americans and then takes some pills that turn him into a madness henchman. Didn't really follow with what was happening.

Audio: Happy times!

Overall: I have no honest idea how to improve this.

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SCTE3

Score: 8

"It's alright"

submission: CT: Apocalypse V

date: January 1, 2010

Brings back memoires of playing Chrono Trigger and Chrono Cross on my PSX, this flash did have a slight problem though.

Animation: All sprites and they seemed to be alright, can't really judge well with sprites too much.

Audio: Quite fitting even if the storyline is a bit confusing to figure out.

Storyline: They were doing something in the past that will eventually affect the future?

Overall: The only problem that annoyed me was I had to constantly right click to go to the next frame in the flash. Possibly add buttons to each dialogue box so we can click those instead of right clicking.

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SCTE3

Score: 10

"Wonderful plot and happy end"

submission: |~Snow Snow For Lucy~|

date: December 30, 2009

Story seemed to be pretty touching, her father died and the robotic inventor takes her under his wing but is cruel up until the nearing moments he dies. In the end she opens up her papa's toy shop with one who she met and they all have a happy end when they discover they both have robotic limbs.

Storyline: It opens showing her papa being quite cruel and unforgiving, she didn't want to make toys at first but turns out she has to make things that make her papa happy or she gets no food. She tries to escape and decides it isn't worth doing since "snow isn't beautiful anymore". The head asks why she doesn't want to leave and her papa asks her to make food but it's for her instead.

Later after death she gets the second part of her arms. She heads outside and watches the craft crash, she helps finish it I suppose. Then they open the store together but she still seems shy. They both discover they have robotic limbs are happy in the end. Also never figured out what that little thing of hers was, I guess a catipiller>butterfly since it has wings at the end.

Animation: It actually looks beautiful but some parts looked real compressed, I guess I should have expected it due to how long the story was. Every frame seemed to have lots of detail put into it as well.

Audio: Seemed quite fitting for every place it was set, serene audio choice, makes it feel more like you're into it.

Overall: No need to improve, beautiful story and Christmas themed motives and whatnot, look forward to more.

SCTE3

Score: 9

"Wonderful motion and emotion"

submission: |~Hug Me To The Skies~|

date: December 29, 2009

This was actually a pretty well done and nicely emotional piece of work. Very nice job here.

Animation: I see you put a lot of work and detail into each frame as the story moved along. Nice to see something with detail from time to time. Also enjoyed how it made an effort of trying to add a little Japanese dialect to the story.

Storyline: A girl seeks to get his attention and he doesn't like her what so ever. he gets a call from his girlfriend(?) Nana and she tells him to come and hug her. The other girl pursues him up until he gets the hot air balloon. She feels sad and kisses her pet fox which turns into a guy and they feel love for each other apparently. He gets Nana on the balloon and ditches her for some reason seeing as he is somehow in the city and she asks him the second task of coming to kiss her.

Audio: Beautiful song anyways.

Overall: No real need to improve, nice job.

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